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Willow ([info]the_willow) wrote,
@ 2008-01-25 20:06:00

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Entry tags:poc sf carnival

I Didn't Get A Heroine - (Besieged By Street Lit)


I Didn't Get A Heroine


Last year sometime during November 2007, I had the opportunity to meet up with a young author who was writing a black martial arts superheroine . I was so incredibly excited. The whole thing was a fluke. I happened to stop in to the library after a day of running errands, even though going to the library had been my first stop of the day. The librarian on duty happened to remember I read a lot of superhero comics and novels and sent me downstairs; the way older black women will do when they think they've got something special for you.

I walked in late when they'd finished discussing the bulk of the book and the author was discussing why her character was currently celibate. She was discussing wanting to put forth a role model that wasn't all about sex, that she found too many young women getting involved in sexual relationships as if that was all they had and she wanted her book to show something different. As a former fan of Laurell K Hamilton that excited me. As a fan of strong female characters, that excited me. I mentioned the carnival and exchanged contact information with the author.

And then a few weeks later I sat with the book in my hands struggling to read through the first chapters. This bright, articulate young author and her book were the straw that broke the camel's back, the drop that overflowed my cup of tolerance. I didn't even realize there was a cup, or a camel, until things cracked and spilled everywhere.

I've thought long and hard about whether or not it was the style of the book that I disliked. For example, I don't like chick-lit books. Most of the ones I come across give a lot of time and attention to designer shoes, handbags and underwear and set up a kind of superficiality that I find personally distasteful.

I've come to the conclusion that what happened was that I'd picked up the book eager to read superheroics, or possibly just a mystery with a black, female, hero doing a little vigilante work. And instead I got something with a story that seemed poorly formed, disorganized and then on top of that the genre itself seemed more like Street Lit dressed up in leather with a touch of martial arts.

Currently it seems as if the Publishing Industry has decided that Ghetto Lit / Street Lit is a license to print money. Street Lit is everywhere. It took up three shelves at my last local branch library. It's proudly displayed in the 'New Books' section at my new local branch library. I see women on the bus reading it. I see teenagers reading it. I see magazine articles and submission forms on local bulletin boards. It is everywhere.

And remember my local branch librarian is the one who recommended the book and author to me based on seeing me borrow trade paperback after trade paperback of Wonder Woman, Justice League, Superman, X-Men, Bone and more. Not to mention all the novels I borrow that deal with supernatural vigilante/detective types.

And she isn't a young librarian either. She's the kind of librarian with her glasses just perched on the edge of her nose, whose hair is wonderfully colour rinsed and styled and who speaks with the slight smack of old school that can make a person think of church ladies and older schoolmarm aunties.

Maybe it's stereotyping on my end to be shocked that a librarian like that, who smiles when you show your vocabulary in general conversation, would be encouraging her public to read books like this one. Or maybe it's a commentary on how much less reading is getting done as a whole and how librarians are on the front lines trying to promote reading as interesting and worthwhile. But that might be a whole other essay that requires a different line of thought.

The book, which I hesitate to mention by name as I'm unsure of the etiquette of doing so, is published by an in house imprint of Simon &Schuster. Simon & Schuster are not small names in publishing.

As I tried to read, the tense switched; present, past, present again and not in a flashback. Sometimes within the same sentence. There were long descriptions of people and objects that were then repeated, sometimes a few paragraphs later, sometimes a chapter later. And then again and again.

I had the sense that the narrative was unfocused, that things were meandering and when they got back to the original point the side trip had served no useful purpose.

I'm not honestly sure how much I read. I think at least five chapters, possibly a little more. But I had to put the book down when I realized I was getting the life story of a randomly met child, and the life story of her mother, father, stepfather and little brother and I had no idea if the child was supposed to be currently talking out all this personal information that included sneaking out the house after her mother had had sex with her boyfriend or if it was more of the author not realizing the limits of first person point of view.

I was confused and angered and incredulous, because I was reading a first person narrative include information and facts about newly met characters that the point of view character couldn't possibly know. I'm not talking about things that can be deduced via observation like malnutrition if a young child seems shorter than average and is extra skinny. I'm talking family history and the thoughts and motivations of yet more characters that the point of view character had not even met - the little girl mentioned above. And none of it was presented in a form of 'I later learned that...'

The sex and violence of the books were another disappointment. After the meet and greet and hearing some of the author's thoughts about sex, I hadn't been expecting to find a book filled with sexual descriptions. I hadn't expected to find non-consensual sex acts within the first chapter, or a grizzly, gruesome, public murder of the type seen in movies like SAW.

And it wasn't the gore that bothered me. It was being expected to believe that such a thing could happen that directly relates to the main character's childhood but people would forget about it. Maybe I've read too much Batman.

I've heard the publishing industry is a very different animal than what it even was five years ago. I've heard that authors need to spend money sending their books out to separate editors. But blatant tense changes, spelling errors and grammatical errors? These unfocused story telling errors? I found myself asking - is this considered acceptable because it's a black product?

Whatever the author's personal responsibility in finding an editor or editing company to help her catch basic mistakes, and assemble her story coherently, I am angry at Simon and Schuster and their imprint, however independent it might be.

The imprint's website touts itself as "Bringing you the future in minority literature today!".

Are black people deemed so stupid that it doesn't matter if the books they read have mistakes? It doesn't matter if they make sense? It doesn't matter that they get something good?

Are black stories so inconsequential except for the part where writing about the hood, and drugs and sex and violence and child neglect and child abuse, makes the publishers money?

I admit I took this personally. As someone who hopes to be published someday, perhaps I can't help but take it personally. But I was left thinking that someone picking up this book would walk away thinking that perhaps either black authors can't write, or that only black people could possibly understand how the story flows because it doesn't make sense to them compared to all the other books they've read over their lifetime. So for them here's confirmation that black authors don't write for them.

And that pisses me off.

Tananarive Due. I never saw Tananarive Due anywhere in any SciFi section. Ever. I knew Octavia Butler, but I didn't know T. Due, not until this past summer when I was feeling for AA Lit and there staring me in the face in the middle of the slice of life and love stories was my genre. And there Street Lit is eating up the African American Lit sections of bookstores where black authors tend to get stuck no matter what they write or who they write about.

I've mentioned before in a Carnival Millenia Black and her story. She mentions in an August '07 blogpost how being acquired by a major traditional publisher (who subsequently promoted her works as AA) decreased her marketability.

Millenia's struggle, combined with the rise in popularity of Street Lit and my experience with a work I thought was going to expand People of Colour in the SciFi genre, but instead was nothing but dressed up Ghetto Stories, paints an ugly picture to me. It is an ugly picture of not only how work by black authors are perceived, but stereotypes etched into business plans of what black people read; perhaps even at what level they can read.

And that just makes this all the more explosive to me because the superhero book that wasn't a superhero book is not the first time I've expected one thing and got Street Lit instead.

Searching for books for my younger sister last year, I stumbled across KIMANI TRU. And no, I'm not going to link them.

KIMANI TRU bills itself as: The ultimate destination for entertaining fiction for African-American teens. Friendship. Love. Family. School. Life. Drama. We have it all covered from the city to the suburbs and everywhere in between. Reflecting your dreams. Your issues. In your voice.

I grew up with Nancy Drew and The Baby Sitter's Club and Encyclopedia Brown and Sweet Valley High (they had mysteries and adventures too) among many others. The thought of my sister getting to read the same stories, but with black protagonists excited me. She's dealing with very different issues than I had to deal with at her age. I grew up in the Caribbean where I had to be told my best friend was specifically white and just not a Bajan. My baby sister's known what it means to be a black person in a car the police flags to the side since she was four.

Scrolling through the site, I picked one book that looked interesting and sent off to the library for a copy to read. But I was so excited at finding the imprint, I recced the label to my little sister before I read the books. Luckily, by the time I did read she hadn't gotten around to buying them yet and I quickly put a stop to that idea.

And while it was my fault I recced the books without reading any first, I thought these were books about how difficult it is to be a teenager while feeling all alone, never realizing that everyone else isn't actually that different. If you've read Sweet Valley High etc, perhaps you know what I mean - books about cliques and first dates and being popular or not so popular and parental pressures and trying to sort yourself out. In fact I thought the books were for teens ages 14 or so and up.

I picked up The Edification of Sonya Crane. I thought I was going to read a book about a white girl whose mother gets caught up in drugs and thus circumstances force them to move to a black neighbourhood where the girl is mistaken for being biracial.

Yes, her mother gets caught up in drugs. But that can be a fact of life for some teenagers and I didn't think that would or should be an immediate warning sign for graphic content.

Heck I may not have read the books before recommending them to my sister, but I did check out Amazon.com. And I can remember rolling my eyes at one reviewer (of the very book I'd picked as interesting to me) who was in an absolute tizzy because she glanced through the book before giving it to her daughter and was appalled. I remember thinking that person was trying to hide discomfort at certain aspects of race relations perhaps being brunt and honest from a black point of view.

I was wrong.

So. So wrong.

The Edification of Sonya Crane is a book with graphic underage molestation, rape, sex, drug use, violence, more rape, graphically described sex acts, pregnancy - at that point the cussing was passing under my radar cause WTF?

"Reflecting your dreams. Your issues. In your voice."

WTF???

What was this?!!

It's Street Lit for the Kiddies, is what it was.

To look at the book covers I couldn't imagine that they think modern black teenagers should all be relating to drug lords, physical child abuse, child neglect, drug abuse and grown men forcing themselves onto fifteen and sixteen year old girls. And I really don't care if this is just one book in the whole imprint. They included it in the imprint. They sent it out into the world to represent them; And now it has.

When did I end up the naive one for thinking a book that emphasizes the rivalry between two girls in a highschool setting would not have the scales tipped because one discovers the other blowing a teacher behind the bleachers - with mentions of saliva and penis veins?!??!

Am I just old?

Or is this, part of that unpleasant picture I mentioned before as to what is modern black/ African American literature, what it should be about and who reads it.

Because I'm not liking this picture, not at all. But I have no idea what to do to change it.

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[info]dragovianknight
2008-01-26 02:44 am UTC (link)
The Edification of Sonya Crane is a book with graphic underage molestation, rape, sex, drug use, violence, more rape, graphically described sex acts, pregnancy - at that point the cussing was passing under my radar cause WTF?

Well, obviously that sort of thing is okay for black teenagers to read about, because they're all into sex, drugs, and gangs, anyway. They'd never be interested in the things normal teenagers like. (Holy fuck, saliva and penis veins? And we have to rate our stories and put them behind cuts?)

Possibly, I hate everyone right now. And why the hell don't I have my racism icon uploaded over here? Imaro frowning hotly disapprovingly will have to do.

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[info]the_willow
2008-01-26 02:59 am UTC (link)
Dude, the 'protagonist' walks in on her molester going down on her passed out mother right there in the living room. And there's all 'wet around the mouth' and crap. And slurp sounds.

I couldn't believe what I was reading. I think that's the only reason I made it into like chapter 7. And then I flipped through the rest of the book and it did not get any better.

Worse yet the white girl decided to embrace her fake heritage by growing locks and wearing long skirts and beads and talking about 'my brother, my sister' and talking back to the principal cause he was 'the man'...

But yeah, if you tried posting excerpts from the book on livejournal without a cut tag or an adult flag, I'm pretty sure you'd get into trouble.

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[info]dragovianknight
2008-01-26 03:07 am UTC (link)
You know, in the parts of fandom where I hang out, even the explicitly R/NC17 rated stuff usually doesn't get that graphic.

Worse yet the white girl decided to embrace her fake heritage by growing locks and wearing long skirts and beads and talking about 'my brother, my sister' and talking back to the principal cause he was 'the man'...

Aww, it's good that white girl embraced a fake version of her fake heritage. Stereotypes for the win!

(Thank you, though, for linking to Tananarive Due. If I read The Good House, is it going to freak me the hell out and make me sleep with the lights on?)

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[info]skywardprodigal
2008-06-05 01:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh, now see, that's WRONG.

Geez.

And I may never recover from the penis veins.

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[info]ephemera.livejournal.com
2008-01-28 03:09 pm UTC (link)
damn - I'm sorry that that book didn't turn out to be one tenth of what you hoped for.

The extreme content of some YA is a hard topic - abuse, drugs, pregnancy, etc shouldn't be the experience of any child, far less assumed to be common ground for all, but seeing representations that both show those themes realistically and show them as *wrong* can be a lifesaver for teens who *do* come from that context and have never been able to identify with it on page before. It's off the race track, but have you read Melvin Burgess's -shoot, it was called Junk in the UK but something else in the US... *googles* - Smack. It's a little dated, but I'd still stand by it as an excellent YA book - I'm curious as to how it compares to the book you described.

(my lecturer's teaching a YA novel called Jupiter Williams, set in the black communities of the 17thC in London, and I have some reservations about it's writing craft and the overall image presented (although I've met the author, and he's pretty damn cool in person) Again, would be interested in your opinion.)

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[info]the_willow
2008-05-25 12:16 pm UTC (link)
Damn it, I never got this comment.

I'll put Jupiter Williams and Smack on my To-Read-List.

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[info]coffeeandink.livejournal.com
2008-06-05 01:29 pm UTC (link)
I read Smack a few years ago and skimmed The Education of Sonya Crane a few months ago, and so you may want to take my opinion with a grain of salt, but ... the attitude is so different! The level of detail, too, if not the frequency of mentions of drugs and sex, but really, what made it different for me was that Smack is about drugs as a tragedy and it really feels like it's inside the characters' heads but also being written/arranged by someone who's got a wider view of things, whereas The Education of Sonya Crane ... okay, I admit it, I picked it because I was fascinated by the idea of racial passing, of the desire for coolness and belonging, of racial passing the other way since most of the examples I've read are about black people trying to assimilate into whiteness; and I thought there would be fascinating and complex stuff about identity and authenticity and power. And it's just ... I'm not sure how to describe it. It's just exploitative. It feels like the author expects the readers to get off on the characters' exploitation. And it feels like the author didn't really consider the power/political aspects of racial passing at all. I wondered if they were white, honestly, because the representation of passing was so ... flat. So without history.

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[info]the_willow
2008-06-15 03:34 pm UTC (link)
There's a picture of the author on KIMANU's website and the author is either white or a bi-racial male.

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[info]kaethe
2008-06-06 09:19 pm UTC (link)
This is tangential to your point, but have you ever read the Bluford Series? These are high interest/low reading level books that are set in a urban (probably inner city) neighborhood filled with people of color. They're well-liked by kids of all colors at my middle school. The one I read was simply but not poorly written.

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[info]tsubaki-ny.livejournal.com
2008-08-29 01:49 pm UTC (link)
This is awkward and weird and you don't know me from a hole in the ceiling, (I know of you through lkh_lashouts, and through some of your fantastic postings on, I believe, racism and sexism in the comic-book industry, I have developed tremendous respect) so I want to ask first -- may I say a thing about this? Particularly my experience of Kimani Tru and the novel in question?

I'm fully aware of how weird this is. It's been on my mind for several weeks now -- probably it would be less weird if I hadn't let it ruminate so long...

For the sake of being less freakishly mysterious, in summary, I have a serious, SERIOUS problem with the imprint, but possibly not the same one you have, and because of my own problem, I actually think "Sonya Crane" is the best thing (and the least disrespectful to black people) they've put out.

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[info]the_willow
2008-08-29 02:30 pm UTC (link)
I actually think "Sonya Crane" is the best thing (and the least disrespectful to black people) they've put out.

This I've got to hear, even though it might scar and traumatize me for life. Penis veins. PENIS VEINS. When I want to remind people of the book I read - I just say "Penis. Veins."

But I am interested in your point of view - have you read other ghetto/street lit books? Are you judging the Kimani imprint against that?

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[info]the_willow
2008-08-30 11:37 pm UTC (link)
*pokes*

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[info]unusualmusic
2009-07-23 08:30 pm UTC (link)
hey there. If you still remember this post, I am really curious to hear from you on the subject of Kimani Tru...

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[info]unusualmusic
2009-07-23 08:29 pm UTC (link)
*stares*


Oh dear. Oh oh dear. Yeah, I'll rec individual books and not the entire imprint, cause I have seen BS at my B& N from this imprint, but had no idea that it had gone so far. Which makes me think that a good topic for race and class would be what the hell is up with so many black YA books focuing on the really really graphic and shitty parts of growing up in the ghetto, while white have the choices of country, suburban and when their circs are poor, they are not protrayed as stomach-turningly as street lit is protrayed? I mean seriously, as I think about it, so many of the books I saw there had serious issues. How come the white couples could have sex with little to no consequences, when many of the black couples ended up with kids? And the boyfriend drama was soooo over the top. I was just so happy to see black faces. And there are a lot of good stuff among the dross... Damn.

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[info]the_willow
2009-07-23 08:33 pm UTC (link)
I can't recc anything from the imprint, though I can understand you doing so if you read books in it that were memorable in the good way. But definitely Race and Class could cover this.

Because Sonya DOES GET PREGNANT TOO. Apparently embracing even faux blackness means embracing fertility (along with deadlocks and dashikis).

And I see women in their 40's and 50's, black and latina, reading the same stuff as 15 year old girls. And it's all 'This Pimp's Daughter' and 'Little Brown Ho' etc.

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[info]unusualmusic
2009-07-23 08:47 pm UTC (link)
Because Sonya DOES GET PREGNANT TOO. Apparently embracing even faux blackness means embracing fertility (along with deadlocks and dashikis).

And I see women in their 40's and 50's, black and latina, reading the same stuff as 15 year old girls. And it's all 'This Pimp's Daughter' and 'Little Brown Ho' etc.


I. I...what. Its just...I mean... *sigh*


Black folk picked up the nonsense with Liar, by the way.

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[info]unusualmusic
2009-07-23 08:33 pm UTC (link)
Let me rec you Nikki Carter, by the way. funny. Christian kid but not preachy, and boyfriends and the acquiring thereof are not the be alls and end alls of her life. And friendships are explored pretty well in the series. Of course there is the usual bitchqueen who is boy crazy...*sigh* So fucking SICK of that trope. But good.

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[info]amilliondays
2009-07-23 11:20 pm UTC (link)
The Edification of Sonya Crane is a book with graphic underage molestation, rape, sex, drug use, violence, more rape, graphically described sex acts, pregnancy - at that point the cussing was passing under my radar cause WTF?

"Reflecting your dreams. Your issues. In your voice."


The juxtaposition there is making my head hurt and my stomach twist. The picture you paint is disgusting and wrong and it's a useless response except on a personal level to want to punch a wall and pitch a fit and be like "NO NO NO NO NO WRONG MAKE IT STOP" because that won't solve anything, but ... I HATE EVERYTHING, make this fuckery stop.

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